Tuesday, February 4, 2020

100WC - Week #19 - Samara

I  woke up to see that the pantry was empty, I  looked in the fridge and all I can see was dad's leftover tomato  and peach pudding. I closed the fridge door, after minutes of staring  at the pantry I finally Decided go shopping. I really didn’t like shopping alone but I had no choice.     When I got to town I realized although it was Saturday nothing was open. I looked around still wondering whether I was missing something or not. I looked in the window of the dairy, no one was there. When I realized it was the queen's birthday!
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2020 at 3:02 PM

    Hi Samara I really like the part when you said you don´t go shopping by yourself.
    From Emily

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2020 at 3:04 PM

    Hi Samara
    What I like about your story is it was the Queens birthday and that you forgot. what do you do on the Queens birthday? I just hang out.
    from
    Kate

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    1. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2020 at 3:25 PM

      Hi Kate,
      I've most likely stay home and watch TV
      From Samara

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