Tuesday, October 16, 2018

100WC #6 - Laine

One evening I was running the bath for me to get in before bed.  Its finished, let's get in. So nice, so good, so warm. Bubbles, I almost forgot bubbles. Now let's get in. I danced in the bath but then a fighter came through the window  he had a mask on I was so scared I almost died. It was scary, he had a knife so then when he was stealing my stuff. I got the bubble bath soap and squirted at him  he was wobbling clumsily, it was so stupid. Then he fell out of the window and then I drunk my orange juice.
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