Tuesday, October 30, 2018

100WC Week #8 - Rebecca

“Mum do I have to go”
“Yes”
“Why”
“Because I said so, so hurry up and do your chores “
“Aughh”
Later day her mum came back into the kitchen to make sure she had done the
dishes. But she didn’t see what she wanted to see.
“Jasmine get here NOW”
“Yes mum”
“Don’t you go yes mum like nothing happened young lady”
“Fine i’ll do the dishes”
“You better”
“I will now scram”
"If i come back and you have done them you will be in big trouble."

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