Friday, October 19, 2018

100WC - Week #6 - Zak


One day I danced in the bath doing orange justice. I had my phone, I logged in to my fortnite account  and  I played game of fortnite.  I killed ninja on fortnite  and  another ninja came. I fighter and I kill him but had a C4 it was ready to go and I pushed the wrong button mm 321 boom I exploded my little face I was so clumsy.  At that moment I was so clumsy, it was my day to let him see you later.

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