¨oooooooo look at these Beatles Gavin they would be good for the photoshoot¨ Said Jeff
¨yeah they look great I will take a photo of them now¨ replied Gavin
¨ there is so much I guess I will stand in the middle of them¨ said Gavin as he reached his leg over trying not to squash any of them.
¨ Hold on stay still I will try to get a photo of you that would be great for the photoshoot¨replied Jeff getting his camera out
¨ okay… fingers cross Wait that is going to be hard I might just use my legs...¨
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