One day my annoying little sister was about to go to her dance rehearsal and I had to take her, I tried to argue it out with Mum and Dad but it did not work. “Why do I have to take her?” I complained.
“Because I said so.” is all she said. So I ended up taking her to her little kid to dance rehearsal. When we got there the room was filled with little kids wearing tutus and and ballet slippers. I was sitting there for hours and after a while we finally got to go home.
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