One day I was doing something in the garden. I was planting plants for Mum, it is so boring planting things. "Why can't I do anything else" I said to Mum. "Why can't I do the dishes or vacuum the house, why do I have to plant flowers and fruit?"
"Because I said so Laine, so get to it and chop chop. Maybe after that we can eat jelly and have chips and dip, if you're lucky.
"Okay okay, I will get to it so I can get those chips and dip and jelly." Yay let do this.
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