I walked around the market...looking for the PERFECT shop to spend my money. And then...I found the PERFECT shop! It was a guess what was in the box...if you guessed it right...you got 50 lollies!!! I walked up to the store and saw how much money it was…$20!!!! That was all my money! But I had to see what was inside! I decided to give the 20 dollars to the man and I put my hand in...and I knew what it was straight away…
“It is a lizard!” I say. The man looked shocked....
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