Fighting for her life as she was tired exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists and killed the Mitty best and was given a gifted and.
That gifted will never die and that is love a gifted of love and peace because of her braveness and kindness.
For proceeding her town from the best because she was an orphan so she had no love and no peace because she was treated badly.
So now she has family and friend’s she is a town hero she has all she would like and her orphan friends have a home and love.
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