¨Do you like our new home¨
¨Not really mum its old and creepy and its not home¨
¨I know but it just for now OK. go find your room OK its just up on the second fool OK¨
¨OK mum¨
¨good o and don´t go in the other rooms ok¨
¨yes just go to my room got it¨
¨good¨ that room lets creepy. lets have I look mum won´t mind. I hope she doesn't. ¨DON´T GO IN THERE ADDISON¨
¨sorry mum¨
¨NO YOUR NOT. I TOLD YOU NOT TO GO IN THERE ADDISON. JUST GO TO YOUR ROOM OK AM GOING BUT TO THE FIRST FOOL OK¨ But I had to see what was inside.
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