As I looked into the glass it moved. Oh my gosh it moved the doll it moved. The guards came and took me out of the room.They said why did you do it? I said I wanted to see the haunted doll from the first century. They sed you should not have done it i sed but but i had to see inside!!! I exspland. They said come with us and they have big greedy smiles on their faces. As I start following them I start to feel scared and worried and then we walk to this big black door the lights start flashing. As we walk in I hear a BIG surprise!!! Then i said what!!! Everybody said it's your birthday then i said wait a minute it is? Yes!!!.Everyone laughed OMG I can't believe it.I I forgot that today was my birthday.
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