Once I found a tunnel that was covered in spider webs… but I had to see what was inside… so I climbed inside then I saw that it was an abandoned hospital. There were chairs, xrays and allsorts. After a bit of looking I decided to go further down the tunnel, next minute I saw people they were everywhere. Some were just sitting on a chair. 10 minutes later I was scared so I decided to go after a long day of looking. When I got back home I fell asleep on the floor as I laid there just sleeping.
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