It was midnight, 31st October, Halloween.
I was walking down the street, on my way back home.
A car pulled up beside me, Someone jumped out. They grabbed me
*
I woke up in a dark room, Taped to a chair.
A light turned on above me, she walked into the light.
I could hear that they were exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists….
I closed my eyes, Nothing happened.
I opened one eye, She walked out of the room, the light turned off.
The tape was gone, I hopped off the chair….
Out of the darkness, I saw it...
No comments:
Post a Comment
I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .
I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .