Ahhh my head… Huh what? Where am I? What is this place? Then in the distance, He could see someone. What? Uh hello? Ma´am could you help me? I'm lost. She started to look exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists. Um excuse me? Hello… You may not know who I am... Yea who are you? I am your NIGHTMARE! Um okay? PREPARE TO MEET YOUR DOOM! How exactly? By doing...ZOMBIES!!! What...OH I SEE NOW! UM I GOTTA DIP CREEPY MAN! HEY…..DONT SAY THAT TO ME! WHO CARES! I'M OUT! Rrrr Brains...BRAINS! Oh quacks man!
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