Tuesday, June 4, 2019

100WC #33 - Abbie



‘’Dad where is my hat i can’t find it anywhere’’ i yell. ‘’Well have you looked in the car or in your room’’ he said. Yes i have looked in there i’ve looked everywhere ‘’remember if i can’t find it then we can’t go to the beach’’ i say curiously. The next day i am still looking for my hat so i put up some posters for it i put that it is pink with purple stars then i come home and it is my hat and i say to dad ‘’why was that hat on the table i have been looking for that for ages and ages seriously’’ i say.

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