Thursday, June 27, 2019

100WC - Week #36 - Keira

I was in bed getting ready to go to the pools again, I sleep and dream i think about stuff.
 Looking back, I remember when I kinda did a thing?
 And had to go home because of it i kinda didn't know where the bathroom was, I was only like four soo?
I fell asleep but all I thought about was that.
The next day I was so excited I got all ready and even bought two of everything.
We arrived and I started thinking about what i was thinking last night, I jumped in I had the best time and it didn't happen i was so relieved.
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousNovember 17, 2019 at 1:56 PM

    Hi Keira, I enjoy this story and I can see the progress you have made since this story and your writing now

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