Sunday, June 9, 2019

100WC #34 - Biankha

As I was walking to school I saw a glass of well I don’t know it looked just like a glass of water. So I picked it up then it turned blue I thought maybe it was a reflection but it was the real whatever it was .I tried it and it was flat lemonade I thought it was going to be way worse  but I was so relieved so I started to drink more and more until it was gone and then I turned green and blue. As I keeped on going to school I changed back to normal.
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