“Let's play dominos!” I shout. Leo comes running into my room. Soon we both have a long path of the mini plastic bricks. Leo tries to knocks over one but it stays still. He looks like he's struggling so I try. It's really stable. “Let's play outside then,” I say and outside we see thousands of dominos lined up. Leo pushes one over and they all, well, domino. I look at Leo and he looks surprised. Are you okay I say. Leo looks me in the eye. “It was easy to push it over,” He says. Now we are terrified.
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