One Night when I was sleeping I had a Nightmare and this is what happened in my nightmare
‘I was at school then I released that the ramp was broken I had a giant hole in it I went up to the hole and found a weird green person it was staring right at me then It said ”dbvjgdu.”
Right then I knew that it was an alien I ran to my class and then I saw an orange guy then I ran to my sisters class.
looking back I remember that I have to take off my shoes to go into the class...
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