One day I went to the table and there
was a hat on the table and then I went to dad and I said is this your hat and
dad said sorry no it is not mine. The next day the hat was gone and then all of
the sudden dad said the hat that was on the table yesterday it was mine and
then I said that you have to take care of you hat.
The next day dad went to go and put
his hat on and then it was not on the table he thought it was and then it
changed to another table and I said dad have you noticed that your hat is a
different colour and then he said how did the colour change and then we said we
don't know.
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