Sunday, June 23, 2019
100WC - Week #36 - Abby Sommerhalder The Rose 3
“Leo is that you?” I say. Leo grabs the hat and takes it. I run after Leo out of the shop but he disappears. Where did he go I ask the hat maker. “Where did he like to go?” he replied. Looking back I remember the rose. I run to the pavement were we had found it and Leo is sitting there. When he sees me he then shakes his head. “A-Abby?” he says white as a ghost. Then the rose falls down. Dead. Leo was free of the curse. We walk back home. Don’t tell mum this I say.
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