Me and my friend who is Liam, we were watching the NBA finals and it was lebron james vs dirk nowitzki. I was going the lakers and liam was going for dallas mavericks. When the game started the lakers already scored 1 goal and it was a slam dunk. Then a few minutes dallas mavericks scored a 2 pointer. Then me and liam went and got some food I got some chips and a hot dog liam got the same. when we sat down I had my chips and I ate my hot dog and I forgot I had my hot dog so I asked liam where is my hot dog. I don’t know I think you ate it said liam looking back, I remember that I ate the hot dog and the lakers won it was 108 and dallas mavericks were 98.
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