̈ ̈Ah it's so nice to be free from the world¨ I say to myself
Looking back I remember myself getting old and frail and talking to myself was the only thing that kept me company.When I was a child my parents used to say ̈giving up is the worst choice you could possibly make.¨I never knew how bad it could be because I was only a kid but my parents were right it is the worst thing you could possibly do.So anyone who is reading this don't give up no matter how much you want to!
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