Sunday, June 9, 2019
100WC #34 - Charli Tracey
‘Mum’ I’m awake and ready to go to school, why are you so happy to go said mum, because I get to see how my science experiment went replied Charli ,cool said mum lets go to school, then we got to school and mum walked me in because it was raining, then I ran to my science experiment, and it looked just like a glass of water ,then I looked around the room and everyone else worked, but not my, mum I said in a sad, my did not work I was so sad that mum said ,Charli let's just go home then, so we did.
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