One lovely morning when I say lovely morning I mean christmas.
I run straight to my parents room and I shout It’s christmas excitedly. then I go to my older brothers room and shout wake up wake up and he just responds shut up and go away so I walked away and the he was lie jk It’s christmas. For christmas I got a rose gold scooter for christmas my brother asked a very transparent sadly my family were too late to see my reaction to my scooter.
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