Far, far, far away from planet Earth. NASA searched a mysterious planet it’s similar to planet Earth, but dark and evil. NASA put the mysterious planet on tv news, a lot of people around the world saw this planet. Most people called it alien planet. Some people called it pure evil dark planet. When 10 spaceships went to look at this mysterious planet there are tonnes of monsters or alien, they can’t see their whole body because they are by some black flax. They can see their hair the colour of the hair is light brown also pink. It looks like they live in the middle of the forest.
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