Today I went to the witch doctor and this is what she said,
Have you been sick all day and night lying in your bed,
I said no maybe I don't care I just want long thick luscious hair’
And this is what she said,
Go get me a red girafe a pinch of salt a greasy car and big brown toad,
A pixie in a jar a melted ruby and the last thing a D.V.D movie,
Once I brought her all these things she clapped her hands a one, two , three,
You know what she did, you probably do, I turned into a cow a MOO MOO MOO!!!
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