Today is the first day of the weekend i can stay in bed and do whatever i want but then mum bangs into the room and says ¨Go outside we can go on the scooter¨ but i can't see it it looks transparent then i lie back in bed and she leaves i run to the kitchen excitedly and realised i was late i still ran for the food i went had it in bed then had a normal day at home doing nothing. Two seconds later mum screams and goes outside i had to go on the scooter seriously no more fun
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