I found it! The pickaxe of glory. I was playing minecraft and I was in a cave. A white pickaxe was glowing in the middle of a stone island. The only obstacle : A four block wide lava pit. I am really bad at parkour and I can’t make a 4 block jump. Only pros can! I slowly back up until I hit the stone wall. Then I run and jump. Yes I made it! I pick up the tool of glory with a big smile, until I slip into the lava! I then die in the lava. I hate life.
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