An anchor sit’s far far away from… actually right next to the highway on the way to the beach as you can sea it’s quite close to the beach but the wrong one we’re going to cooks beach cooks beach is were captain cook first landed when he visited new zealand it’s really relaxing but it can get a bit boring they have just opened a new restaurant there it’s called the vessel it’s really nice it makes the beach a bit more exciting anyway we pasted it were just coming into tairua and we getting diner we notice there's a fish and chip shop open so we go in there and I yell what's that glorius smell it’s mini donuts .
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