Monday, May 20, 2019

100wc #31-Riley





50 years ago a ship was sailing along on the pacific ocean it was taking oil back to land for factories to work. Then a day later a storm struck and pulled the ship off course it traveled for a week then at about 11 o’clock in the morning on the 8th day bang! Everyone rushed outside onto the deck then they all heard a scream from the cabin in front of the boat at that moment everyone realized.

THEY HAD HIT LAND! Some of them screamed some yelled for joy but none of them knew if it was a good or bad thing. The captain had already dropped the anchor. Now… there is now a monument for the day that man died but the ship was taken away only for an anchor to be left.


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2 comments:

  1. UnknownMay 21, 2019 at 2:21 PM

    Abigail M room 23 KNS wellington
    I really liked how you made the time 50 years ago and the the sentence starters.

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  2. AnonymousMay 21, 2019 at 2:37 PM

    I really liked how you made it happen along time ago!

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