Sunday, May 26, 2019
100WC - Week #32 - Abby Sommerhalder. The rose part 1
“Come Leo it’s late,” I say. “Okay,” replied Leo. “I’m coming!” We grab our scooters and ride away from the park. We are half way home when Leo says, “What’s that?” I look across the street and a transparent rose is glistering at us. Leo go’s to touch it excitedly, but I pull him away. “Stop! That’s weird,” I say and throw a stone at it. A lightning bolt shot out of it and zapped it to dust. We report the flower on my phone and continue home. “That’s so weird,” I say. I look behind me. Leo’s not there.
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