Thursday, May 23, 2019

100WC - Week #31 Keira

One day i was going to go to the museum and we had arrived there was this strange guitar looking thing sinking in quicksand or something so i went and touched and thank goodness the quicksand had dried so i did not sink well i saw it and realized this is not part of the museum cause like three roads away there was a museum sign this was not part of it we left to go to the museum but i got kinda suspicious and i asked mum if i could walk to it she said yes and when i arrived there a whole group of lizards came from behind TO BE CONTINUED

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