Tuesday, April 14, 2020

100WC #29 Bailee


¨ How do I stop? I scream as the family car goes flying into the air.
¨I don't know.¨ screams my best friend ¨ It's your family car¨.
¨your right ¨Ï yell. Then…
´SMASH´
¨oh no¨ I whispered right before I fell unconscious.The next day I think, I woke up. I was surrounded by hugs as I realised what about my Friend. Just that thought made me feel sick in the stomach and I feel back unconscious.

Several days passed before I woke up again to find out that the passengers side was worse than the driver.¨NO¨

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  1. AnonymousApril 19, 2020 at 6:42 PM

    That was a good story Bailee
    From Charlie.

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