¨It was a dark and stormy night,¨Me and my friends were having a sleepover. Then…
¨HA HA¨
¨Where is that sound coming from,¨My friend Emily cried.
¨Calm down where probably all so very tired we are hearing things. ¨Let's all go down to that pretty tree and calm down.¨
Without a second thought I marched down to the tree no matter who was or was not following me.
¨What a beautiful tree and look at the pretty Moon¨I exclaim to try and cheer them up..
Then...
´CRACK´
¨Uh oh¨
´SNAP´
¨Um we may have broken the enchanted tree.¨
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