Tuesday, April 21, 2020

100WC - Week #30 - Taisha

Brrrrrrrrrrrrrr it's cold today  I say to myself as i'm walking to school . I'm going to get a flower for Mrs Beck today, “OUCH !! there is a bee in that one” . I got to school, “don't forget to sign in everyone” Mrs  Beck said,  all of a sudden a large crowd surrounded something, I pushed through to see what it was a hole? “The sun has crashed!!!”, people were saying. “Aaaaah!!!” my eyes flashed before me. Is it a dream? Hello anyone here ? I think I fell down . I kick the ground to see if this is really happening,  then...
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