Dawn is slowly breaking and the fish are ready for the long day of swimming. There is low misty fog over the ocean. The moon is peeping out through the gloomy clouds making the countryside look spooky. It looks like the bright yellow moon has been decorated with the branches over the tree which are twisted between each other making it look like a can of spaghetti. The light house on the hill stands alone looking lonely. The tree looks like a person falling backwards with his foot coming out of the ground there are lots of roots on the tree. I think it will be a beautiful day.
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