Tuesday, April 14, 2020

100WC-week #29 aiden


This man is a really bad driver, but the question really is how did he get stuck into the roof? He was probably asleep or not looking at the road when he went up.  His car was probably thrown off a bridge by hulk or some other superhero in New york. But how many people were in the car at the time? How are they going to get the car out of the roof of the house? That's the problem, they are probably going to get a crane and connect the metal rope to the car and rip it out.

1 comment:

I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .