Sunday, April 19, 2020

100WC - Week #30 - Madison

“It doesn’t matter what you think, does it?”
“It does matter what I think, if I want to go to Hawaii then well I want to go to Hawaii,”
My brother and I were arguing about what country we wanted to go to.
He wanted to go to Australia and I wanted to go to Hawaii.
“What are you arguing about!” my Mum shouted from the kitchen.
“Nothing!” we both yelled from the hall.
“Who said we are even going anywhere?” I said.

The next morning Mum and Dad told us that we were going on a trip to Switzerland!

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  1. Mrs BoyceApril 25, 2020 at 6:24 AM


    Hi Madison,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I'd love to go to any of those countries!
    Good work this week.
    Keep writing in these uncertain times.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/

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