“ Let’s start digging!” I say to Dad, picking up the shovel.
We both started digging a big hole. After a few minutes the hole was done. We look up at the bright sun,
“Should we put in the flower seeds now?” I ask.
We pop flower seeds into the hole, and start to kick the dirt back in. “Let’s put the sign up!” I exclaimed.
We walk over to where the sign is and take it over in front f the hole. We push it into the ground. All we could do now was wait for the flower to grow.
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