Saturday, April 25, 2020

100WC - Week #30 - Alex

As the sun sets I scream in anger."He was so annoying. I can't get him out of my head"I shout. As I walk along the path I see a broken sign. “Aaarrrggg” I scream in fury and kick the sign that says Market Hens Pheasants Deer And Cattle in big bold letters. "Me it had to be me. I am the true prodigy" I shouted again. A stranger walked past me and said." True power only comes from within" then he handed me a flower and murmured."Take it". Then I ran off and the flower fell down a hole then i started  saying…'It doesn't matter what you think, does it.
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