I and my friends were walking down the in the zombie apocalypse then we saw a zombie driving a grey car
We ran as fast as we could to the house where the zombie crash into the house we were so mad because it was my lab and my friends too so I got a ladder and climbed up there with my shotgun and minigun and went up there to teach him a lesson I throw him off the roof to my dog Simba and there was one in the boot so I did the same ...
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