Thursday, April 30, 2020

100WC-Week #31 - Ella



It was a cold foggy sunset. I was walking home from school when an old tree started to fall over. I 
 didn't realize that the tree was falling down. When I heard a big bang I looked around the cemetery.
I thought it was prank but I had one more look around and then I realized that an old tree had fallen down. Oh! that is what it was and I started walking home when I heard the pranksters streaming ¨ahh there's a ghost!¨. I didn't believe them because I know it was just a prank so I just walked.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ella, I really enjoyed reading your story! Where did you walk to? I hope you have a wonderful day and come read my blog at https://kidblog.org/class/6th-grade-20203/posts/02eqr6sopt5iymy8qzwhh564o
    -Norah

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