Sunday, June 28, 2020

100 WC-Week 40 Jaxon

SCP containment breech.

(Alarm Sounds)

“Warning SCP-096 has Breeched Containment. please all class d’s return to cells.”
“Welp this is bad” I thought.
The intercoms came on again.
“Warning SCP-096 has entered light containment zone please all MTF officers go to light containment zone.”
All the class d’s returned to their cells. And then i saw it...
106 had also breeched containment i tried to warn the others but before i could the intercom came on again
“Warning all SCP’s at site 17 have breeched. launching nuclear warheads. please go to the nearest exit point.” 
I ran as fast as...

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousJune 30, 2020 at 2:45 PM

    Nice writing. It's very descriptive and gives us a perspective of what a Class D is.

    To improve your writing. Try using Capital letters.

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