Sunday, June 28, 2020

100WC - Week #40 - Milah

Squeak squeak. 

That horrible sound, I hear it all night. It's  time to go check it out.

I walk into the kitchen with my emergency frypan that I store under my bed. Scatter Scatter Scatter. I heard it, ...and then I saw it…  

TWANG!!!!!!. I try hitting the mouse with my frypan all night long. I chase that stupid little mouse. I'm surprised my parents didn't wake up from the amount of TWANGING i did.

  Sadly, I did not kill the mouse. So I went back to bed. 

It's the morning. I wake up, put on my uniform and rush down the stairs for breakfast. And then I see the mouse.



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  1. AnonymousJune 30, 2020 at 2:51 PM

    My goal for this week is...
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