Sunday, June 21, 2020

100WC - Week38 - Carla

Once I worked at a speech zoo and a light gray elephant started speech zoo. I could tell that he was a good reader so i said hi who are you what is your name “ Hello my name is henry and i was wondering if i could be  a student here i am a good reader and i love doing speeches “ well I said yes you can. So your speech is mouses. That day of the speeches. ...then the Elephant delivered his speech...  hello henry said with his  speech in his hands i am going to tell you about mouses...

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