As I walk around my car I see a polar bear looking for me and I try to keep as quiet as I can and it. slowly moves towards the back of the car so i slowly move to the front of the car and then i runs. towards me and then it grands me and opens its mouth.and then it stops and i realize that it was my friend amber the polar bear and i say are you hungry and she says yes and no my friend amber is not a human she is a polar bear amber.
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