I was just standing there, fixing my broken down car. When I realized there was a polar bear just standing there right in front of my eyes. I was worried that it was going to attack. But then it looked kinda friendly. I waved to it, and it tilted it’s head. I thought it was confused till it waved back. I thought he was mimicking me so I started doing funny tricks. Doing a handstand, and believe me I thought he wasn’t going to do it. But, he flipped over on his hands and stood there frozen in the air.
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