Tuesday, June 30, 2020

100WC - Week #40 - Taisha Walker


 

“How you feeling today” said the nurse 

“Good thanks when can I go ???   “ maybe tomorrow if that's okay with you”

“Fine” 



As I was walking down the hospital hallway I heard something the sound of big waves “hmm that's weird”  so I kept walking. The sound gets  louder and louder . I look in the rooms know one is in there . Hello  anyone here ???

 know answer Doctor Vicky ??? The sound starts to scare me. I panicked and ran .


And then I saw it  big waves of water rushing down the hallway.

I scream , What's wrong honey? I  had a bad dream.



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