Sunday, June 28, 2020

100WC - Week #40 - Mia

I looked up into the dark  sky, but I couldn’t see it. “What am I supposed to be looking for Mum?” I asked.

“Just be quite! And look!” Mum replied. I didn’t eve know what I was supposed to be looking for! Mum said something about a rocket ship. But I couldn’t  see a rocket ship!  And then I saw it… a rocket ship, soaring through the sky! “Is that it there?” I asked Mum.

“It sure is!” Mum replied. 


Later that night, I decided to write a story about the rocket ship, and then I hoped back into bed.
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  1. AnonymousJune 30, 2020 at 2:45 PM

    My goal this week is- Use question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
    Mia

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  2. AnonymousJune 30, 2020 at 2:51 PM

    I realy liked your writing because it was realy interisting
    From Carla

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